DOMINATION 01 - Feedback Thread

[Jerry David]

RE: line spacing, if everyone could…

Do paragraph
Breaks like
This

And

Not

Like this

That would help.

Also, enough with the
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Stuff. You’re ruining the web design and making it harder to put the show together! Lol.

An old fashioned efed trait that I’ve never liked. Especially when I’ve been the mug putting the show together lol.

[Keegan]

To be honest, we're on the same page with that one.

[Keegan]

We wouldn't be if we used too many line breaks, though...

[THEHopper]

Honestly one space between paragraphs is acceptable....to not have the space between makes it all seem like one long run-on sentence and would be a TERRIBLE look for the league as well when people come to read the show off the street (if that happens)

My space issue was later int he show when it was multiple lines between Paragraphs

But spacing like I did in this post is perfectly fine and should be the norm to help people digest what they read. There is novel style and reading an actual novel....the second one is not appealing to me at all.

[Legend]

RE: line spacing, if everyone could…

Do paragraph
Breaks like
This

And

Not

Like this

That would help.

Also, enough with the
.
.
.
.
Stuff. You’re ruining the web design and making it harder to put the show together! Lol.

An old fashioned efed trait that I’ve never liked. Especially when I’ve been the mug putting the show together lol.

I am all for the get off my lawn attitude, but I think one has to be careful when dictating match writing. It's hard enough to get people excited about it. I tend to be a little less grumpy about the style in general and more thankful that people are writing matches as long as it's within the spirit of the league as a fedhead.

But I get we have our preferences. I want commentary so I get it trust me!

[Amber Lee]

Overall I thought the show came out really well, it read nicely with some tweaks that need to be made but that's what the next show is for. Haven't gotten all the way through it yet but I think everyone over all did a great job! Keep up the great work everyone and I look forward to the next show!

[Jerry David]

RE: line spacing, if everyone could…

Do paragraph
Breaks like
This

And

Not

Like this

That would help.

Also, enough with the
.
.
.
.
Stuff. You’re ruining the web design and making it harder to put the show together! Lol.

An old fashioned efed trait that I’ve never liked. Especially when I’ve been the mug putting the show together lol.

I am all for the get off my lawn attitude, but I think one has to be careful when dictating match writing. It's hard enough to get people excited about it. I tend to be a little less grumpy about the style in general and more thankful that people are writing matches as long as it's within the spirit of the league as a fedhead.

But I get we have our preferences. I want commentary so I get it trust me!

You can write commentary in literally every match you write mate lol.

[pdbnb]

To be honest, I disliked the

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stuff SO MUCH when writing for SCW that I never even thought of it as a thing for this fed, until I saw it on the write-up.
Happy to abide by these rules, as they are the ones I myself use for my segment and match writing.

[Keegan]

Thanks for sharing, Pedro.

[Seth]

I would say on the match announcements, over in DEFIANCE, we have the ring announcer declare the winners in bold so they're right there to see after the match. Maybe something like that here? That can still be done in novel style.